There was not much I would change about your blog because it was written so well. i would only write a little more imformation because i htink you could use maby a little more.
Your blog could use more voice. You ca't really find what you sound like, you need stuff like ! CAPTIAL LETTERS, ext. I would also add more information.
I can't find anything but if it was me I would put a little bit more information on the last slide about the result of the crusades.
ReplyDeleteThere was not much I would change about your blog because it was written so well. i would only write a little more imformation because i htink you could use maby a little more.
ReplyDeleteYour blog could use more voice. You ca't really find what you sound like, you need stuff like ! CAPTIAL LETTERS, ext. I would also add more information.
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